Revision to the Way Down stories

I'm changing the title for the fourth installment of "Tales from the Way Down". I can't write a story about Glaistig coming after the Way Down crew yet. Its too soon. I've written the story three different times, I've saved all three, and none of them work write. I'm going to think up a different angle for this chapter.

Once again, anyone who wants to see the three previous stories can email me and I'll send them to you. They're amusing, but not what I'm looking for here. But they've given me some good ideas for characters, and I've refined Glaistig's appearence to the point where the words match the picture in my head. That's a step in the right direction at least...right?